narrative writing

W.A.L.T  write a narrative, to do the you need to;put a tittle , introduce the character, describe the setting,explain the problem , write a solution and end the story.

My favourite part of this writing was describing the setting because there were so many ideas i had like spiders everywhere, smashed windows, broken doors , ripped mattress, broken chairs and rust on the sink tap.

I find hard having to think about different ways/words to start my sentences.

My next step is adding punctuation in my writing I will do this by reading over my writing.


what is your favourite type of writing and why?   

The Mirror                                     

Once upon a time there was a cottage.Inside this cottage was one little girl that always got into trouble.Her parents left her at the cottge and they said that they will be going to the supermarket to get some stuff for dinner but they never came back.The little girl was all alone at the little cottage.Then in the morning she checked again and she found her dad but not her mum she checked outside she yelled mum  but no one answered then she saw something moving in the bushes but it was just a hedgehog.She kept checking then they saw a mirror in the middle of the forest the little girl put her arm through the mirror and pulled out her mum she kissed and hugged and they all went back to the cottage and they explained what happend then they all lived happily ever after.