WALT: show our appreciation in a written letter.
This is my thanks you letter to Mr Gray and Miss Pownall for organising camp.
Dear Mr Gray and Miss Pownall,
Thank you for taking us to camp and organising it all.
Without you we wouldn't have gone to camp and had that much fun.
I liked swimming in the devil's-punch-bowl and playing capture the flag.
Yours Sincerely, Claudia
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Kia ora, Claudia!
ReplyDeleteIt was really fun right!I love the swimming to and the games ;))
I think next time you should add more describing words.
And more words.
Ur sincerely,
Paige