WALT: collaborate to create an interesting narrative.
This is the story me and Amelie wrote but we can only write on sentence at a time.
The door swung open revealing a huge Santa With a very tight bathing suit on and very stylish sunglasses. He was very sweaty and smelled like rotten eggs,then Santa spinned around and his sweat got everywhere so Ms Claus had to chase him around the house But then Santa ran out of the house screaming, Miss Claus couldn't catch him so she called the police because Santa looked very crazy just running around with his hands up! At the end the police took him to a place that teaches him how to clean himself and not smell like farts.
Whats you favourite form of writing?
Hi Claudia its Aimee! this story is so funny lol my favourite form of writing its hard because I like all types but I love to write narrative!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of when me, Quinn and Sam did a story about santa! I really like the detail in this and that you added full stops! (so I can breathe) It would be cool if you could try make a santa by yourself then post that instead!
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