Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 17 April 2020
Chocolate chip cookies
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Hi Claudia, this looks like a yummy recipe. Chocolate chip biscuits are one of my favourites. Were they nice?
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia its Aimee from New Brighton Catholic school, its very nice to see you have put them in a straight line instead of being all over the place your next step would probably be to Number your steps. This reminded me of we made biscuits last night:)
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia its Kate from New Brighton Catholic school. I like how you put the detail into the recipe like how you said the brand of flour that would work best. Did you know there is 9034502400 recipes in the world. Next time maybe you should check the grammar on the blog post. Do you know how to make any other cookie recipes?
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