Friday, 25 October 2019

best day ever

W.A.L.T  write a recount.I writ about my best day ever and the goal I set myself is to add more detail to my writing.In my writing I forgot to add detail words but after I read over it I added more detail.My next step is to read over my writing and add punctuation and describe what happened more.
I like recounts because you write about something that has already happened.

Best Day Ever
I saw the water splash right uo to the sand.
I saw the sand castles getting wiped away with the foamy fast waves.
I heard the kids screaming.
I heard the dogs barking. 
I felt wet as the water slid down my back.
I felt the sand spread like butter over my feet.

I wonder why the waves came right up?
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  1. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:21

    Hi Claudia its Paige from new Brighton Catholic school.What i like about your writing was that you add lots of cool things in your story.

    what do you like about the ocean?

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